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What an awful book I wanted to throw it into the wall so many times that I lost count But since I read it in my E reader which I worship I couldn t do this Finally I was so Les Philo-cognitifs: Ils n'aiment que penser et penser autrement frustrated that I just deleted it with satisfying vengeanceIf you wonder what made me so worked up the answer is the treatment of main male character to main heroineI am not some extremeeminist who spit ire when a man tries to help me with the coat or pay or the dinner I am all The Rat a tat Mystery Barney Mysteries for strong dominant man in charge But this book was just too over the topFirst of all Talen addresses to Cara only as mate or wife You re not the only one with a temper mate Churned gravel coated his voice Or This discussion is tabled notinished wife Talen said in a deep growlWhat the hell Even dogs have names Maybe Talen just had very bad memory Paula for the names Or maybe he change women so often that it is simpler to address them this way than try to remember everyone s names I never readar enough to The Mad Scientists Guide to World Domination figure out what his problem was I read a lot of book with really dominant male and I have never seen such treatment Takeor example Barrons Love Unexpected Unexpected from Fever series Who can be dominant than he is But in all books he addresses to Mac as MsLane Or take Adamrom Mercy Thompson series He is a pack Alfa which meant he is very dominant Have you ever heard him call up to Mercy as mate As if it not enough to address a woman in such manner Talen also branded Cara You can read about branding mates in others book too but it is often some small and delicate tattoo in imperceptible place And that is exactly what Talen brand Le Tartuffe ou L’Imposteur from mating is He lifted his right hand palm out A crest an intricate one spread across his calloused skin Thick and black a webbing of arcs togetherormed a knot with what might be an elaborate K in the middle Guess what kind of brand Cara got A marking on her ass She twisted her torso to stare at her right hip Her skin held the بحر الفوائد المشهور بمعاني الأخبار full imprint ofingers To the Eastern Seas (Kydd Sea Adventures from a man s hand A large hand She swiveled to see the connected palm on the backside of her hip with the intricate black crest settled in the middle It was the perfect imprint of Talen s hand as he had held herI guess all that missing is a bell on her neck and tags in her ears When Caraound out about marking which is permanent by the way she obviously became angry and in rightful Zarlah the Martian fury called Talen son of a bitch I think he deserved stronger words if you asked me Two hands grasped her arms and hauled her across the seat to perch on hisirm lap Apologize wife His voice was low and controlled as were the hands gripping her armsGeez he is a real charmer But let s not through all stones at Talen Yes he behaves like an ass but it is Cara who put up with it and doesn t try to make him treat her differently I m sorry I called you that name she said grudginglyDoesn t this woman have a backbone at all If she wouldn t stand Slenderbone for herself then I guess she deserved such treatmentAnd this nonsense never stopped Aour year old girl who called Talen Daddy after a day of knowing him So unrealistic Or when Tallen almost raped Cara because in his mind no means yes I want you but I don t want to look easy but take me anyway We will mate tonight wife His eyes Farm at the End of the Road flared hot and golden No She lifted her chin and ignored the skittering in her lower stomach Cara he leanedorward in his chair before this night has ended you will have no doubt you ve been mated No Cara tried to shove Discursos de sobremesa force into the words None of that s going to happen Talen An arched eyebrow met her earnest gaze We re married Cara Soon we ll be mated No isn t an optionor you She slammed her hands on her hips and wondered if a decent sidekick could take out his knee I don t want to be mated You will How many no does he need to understand that it is not some way of woman Puls în alb și negru Puls în alb și negru flirtation But Cara obviously enjoyed whatollowed after so maybe Talen is right and I just don t understand somethingThis book was Lesclave sexuelle full of such things I can t name them all because there are too many of them And I didn t even read a half of the book If you want to read about world where women is just a vagina with legs then this book is what you need But if you lookor beautiful relationship strong affection and respect between characters than you should never touch it Just throw it right away This world is a total rip off of Tessa Dawn s series Blood CurseThe main guy in this book Talen is a vampire who rescues Cara and her daughter in the middle of the night by breaking down her door grabbing her and Bold Seduction The Hornsby Brothers forcing her into a car all while threatening and bullying her because she may just may think that HE is the bad guy After all he is kidnapping her and her child But how dare she uestion his motives She s his mate He will kidnap her brand herorcibly mate her separate her Closing the Asylum Mental Patient in Modern Society from her 4 yr old daughteror weeks tag her with a gps device and It s making me so rustrated Angry I usually LOVE alpha men authors such as Gena Showalter Nalini Singh and Cynthia Eden manage to make them so appealing sexy possessive and protective I all in love I m both envious and ecstatic Fool Moon for the heroine especially if they prove to be a good matchor the hero She gives as good as she gets and the hero learns to respect that if he hasn t already and it strengthens their relationship in a really good heart melting kind of way Talen I don t Know What S Going what s going with him He has the same ualities as those alpha males I love Maybe the The Procedures of Love fact that he calls her mate or wife than her actual name Maybe that pisses me off Maybe it also p She stood in the steamy shower with golden eyes on her with one of his warm hands covering her heart and the other covering her core Sheorgot how to think He was big and dark and most definitely dangerous Defined strength showed in the tight muscles and light smattering of dark hair across his chest as well as in the set of his jaw and Don Juan: Or, the Continuum of the Libido focus of his gaze The hard planes of hisace Secret of the Dragon Dragon Riders of Elantia flushed over deepened hollows stamping him with a predatory look that lived naturally on himOoooo kaaaaay Let s talk about some thingsI went into this book with an open mind I really wanted to enjoy and like this bookWe start off with empath Cara and her little psychic 4 year old daughter Janie Janie runs into Cara s room after having a nightmare and while Cara is comforting her the door busts open and a huge scary dangerous man comes in He s bristling with knives and guns At least six and a halfeet of muscle packed male Las 7 Leyes Universales De La Creación: Domina el arte de crear tu propia realidad. (Spanish Edition) filled the doorwaySo you re saying the book starts off with a home invasionYes that s what I m saying So of course Cara is terrifiedor her life and trying to shield her little daughter The Practice of Public Relations from whoever this guy is The man Talen easily overpowers them both Cara isighting hard kicking and screaming trying to get away trying to knee him in the junkSo page 5 Dark eyes met Cara s and she wavered then shot her knee upward to his groin simultaneously punching her Sumario de Derecho Procesal Penal Puertorriqueno fist toward hisace with a El periquillo sarniento fierce gruntThen on page 6 His strength was unbelievable Her own vulnerability beat into her as she realized her nightshirt had risen to reveal pale pink panties The cool night air rushed across her bare legs Dark denim scratched the tender skin of her inner thighs and she opened her mouth to screamOne swift movement and his mouth covered hers Hotirm and somehow restrained The effort of his restraint belted into her He The Parthenon; its science of forms fought to control himself Heat slammed through her A roaringilled her ears and her breath hitched Her heart slowed and time stopped For a brief moment HIS heartbeat echoed throughout her body to a spot below her stomachHe growled low and his mouth moved
hers no longer silencing her but tasting Exploring thick arm swept around her waist and pulled her into him the other lifted to tangle a hand in her hair He tugged angled her head to the side He went deeper She The Virgin Suicides forgot everythingBOLD is gobsmackedCARMEN is gobsmackedYou kept READING after this shit I can see that you bolded the uestionable sentencesHonestly I should have DNFed right here I mean nothing is of a turn on than kissing the man who just broke into your home dragged yourour year old daughter into a car is taking you to God knows where to do God knows what Sexy right So easy to go Through Space and Time from trying to knee a guy in the balls to making out with him Am I right or am I right This is sarcasmor you literally minded peopleBut still I had hopeYou still had HOPEYes Perhaps everything would be Desert Royal fine But alas all my hopes were in vainThe book isilled with terrible almost indecipherable writing Sentences like uiet pressed in on the truck with a dangerous beatAnd we have super si. Marry Me Cara Paulsen does not give up easily A scientist and a single mother she's used to The Code Girls fightingor what she wants keeping a cool head and doing whatever it takes to protect her.
OVER HERS NO LONGER SILENCING HER BUT TASTING EXPLORING
Rebecca Zanetti Õ 6 ReadLly super cheesy stuff like Cara turned curious eyes their way She had only been apart Atmospheres and Oceans on Computers from Talenor less than an hour and yet butterflies Defending Allye (Mountain Mercenaries Book 1) fluttered in her stomach His thick black hair was tied back in a band throwing the hard angles of hisace into Als die erste Atombombe fiel Kinder aus Hiroshima berichten focus while greenlecks danced through his golden eyes Danger or maybe even violence percolated just under his skin The gold warmed to gilt as his gaze swept herPercolated What oO What about Jordan piloted The Southeast Asian Port and Polity Rise and Demise for several hours west until the Colorado mountains came into view The wild lands suited her new husband Both wereierce in their beauty and well able to withstand the dangerous The Secret Diary of Laura Palmer forces around themAnd Cara stared at the intimidating warrior only aew Gut gegen Nordwind feetrom her Arousal warmed through her like a Saying No: Why It's Important For You And Your Child fine wine His long dark hair lay in thick wet tendrils around aace carved in stone His eyes sparked as wild as the land around them his body Forced Movements, Tropisms and Animal Conduct forgedrom steel He was every dark Women and World Religions fantasy she d ever had she ached in undiscovered placesUndiscovered places What undiscovered places WTF The knife s blade glinted silver in the emerging moonlight its point dripping red life onto the red earth Blood splattered his clothes and covered his hands Savagery was stamped into every line of hisace His Amanti e sospetti fangs glistened sharp and deadly in the dusky lightCara s eyes rolled back into her head and with a small groan she collapsed to the wet leavesoO I was laughing hysterically during these partsIt turns out that Talen is a vampire And this book employs the paranormal romance trope of what I like to call slave wives Anyone who reads Christine Feehan will beamiliar with this concept What it means is that Talen claims Cara as his mate As a result she is branded with his mark Yes branded On her ass She is Canada forced to wear a cuff which she can t take off which tracks her location at all times Talen is very bossy and possessive demanding that she obey him at all times and often speaking of taming her punishing her teaching her her place etc etc etc Then things get even worse than thisWhat Worse than this How theuck could they get worseWell It turns out later that he can read her mind So he can easily invade her mind and read her thoughts whenever he wants to And I thought the part where he hacked her e mail was invasive That was nothing apparently Even worseWorseYes we discover during a sex scene that he can actually 20th Century UFO Alien and Extraterrestrial Government Files from the CIA Central Intelligence Agency force her to become sexually aroused against her will Cara gasped as a warmth slammed into her at the base of her neck beforelowing unchecked through her breasts teasing tightening them Fucked by Force from within Yet he hadn t moved a muscle The unbearable ache hardened her nipples to diamond sharp points She needed something Needed What was he doing to her HowThis is disgusting Then things get worseEven worse oOYes Then we discover that he can completely control her body and all her movements So heorces her to become very aroused with the power of his mind and then renders her completely immobile Why Because he wants her to beg He lashed his teeth Say please You want me you beg or meI just can t with this shit I will admit to you right now that this just isn t my kink Apparently it wasn t enough Sun and Moon for Zanetti that Cara is physically much smaller and weaker than vampire Talen And that she s taken prisoner by him oh I mean kept locked awayor her own protection And tagged with a tracker and branded No he also must be able to read her mind control her sexual desire and control her body s movements It s not even as if she s his dog or slave it s as if she s his I can t even think of a term What would you call it Puppet maybe Let s put aside how absolutely disgusting this whole I own you I control you body and mind thing is Am I supposed to admire the sexual skills of a man who can t even be bothered to arouse his woman himself By touching her and kissing her He has to rely on insta arousal mind control to do that Really I have no idea what the To Your Scattered Bodies Go fun of sex would be with some woman who s basically like your meat puppet What s the point of even having a person in bed with you at all As aemale reader this isn t very appealing to me Putting aside the whole she has zero العقل الباطن free will thing which obviously makes me vomit but just talking about a man who has to resort to this kind of stuff in order to have sex with someone You re not impressing me It s weak and it shows your totalailure as a lover Yeah let s talk about thisHow s the sex CarmenThis guy is shit in bed You d
after living 350 years d understand one or two things but no He seems to False Hope A Rachel Thomas Novel Book 2 find the concept oforeplay His Abused Mate foreign Sex goes like this Some kissing then he slams balls deep into her No I mean nope No no no Where is the slow exploration of bodies Where is theoreplay Where is all the Out アウト fun stuff that SHOULD come between I m kissing you and I mucking you Zanetti plays it off as if Cara is perfectly satisfied and happy with this but I am saying Heck no They have sex A LOT in this book maybe 12 times and in about 10 of them he just skips Sostiene Pereira foreplay entirely I don t get it Is this supposed to be appealing and sexy to aemale reader I don t know about you but I need a little bit lot than thisNot to mention he does the HORRIBLE stuff that I hate like Managerial Economics forbidding her to come unless he gives her permission Which makes me want to murder him I don tind this sexy at all No the L'art du roman fierceness of the voice in her ear made her pause I control that too You ll come when I sayI HATE THIS Orgasm denial makes me rabid beyond beliefAnd then he expects her to come on command I HATE THAT SHIT I can t believe men attempt this shit in real life Either they order you to come way too early and you re like Nope Not happening Also I m turned off now Way to go asshole Or they wait until you were going to come anyway and then are like Comeor me And you re like I was already coming asshole Also go Wintermärchen fuck yourself Any man who tries this shit in bed is just askingor trouble I have zero tolerance The Killing Faith for thatSo the sex is horrible Unless you really really are turned on by not only being a slave but a slave who is under complete mind control That could workor some people but not me UghAlso Zanetti s sex descriptions are very strange He lifted her off the counter by her buttocks She ran wet as he easily balanced her against him with one hand her knees clasping the sides of his hipsShe ran wet WTF She moaned as he increased his thrusts and the Pharmacology And Pharmacotherapeutics friction created a wondrous series of electrical explosions deep within her womb she opened her mind her heart as much as she couldElectrical explosions oO In her womb oO WTFLOL How about this oneor you men A clamoring took up residence in his balls and he considered a cold showerYou know when a clamoring takes up residence in your balls As it does Carmen dies laughingLet s talk about another problem Talen s insistence on calling Cara mate He doesn t call her by her irst name he calls her mate As in wife But this had the unfortunate side effect of rendering everything he said in an australian accent it s everywhere in the Australian accent It s everywhere in the Everything is going along normally and then Don t distract me mateSuddenly like a tire iron to the ace Talen has become an Australian talking to his buddy and I am on the San Juan Sampler Selections from the Nina Heald Webber Southwest Colorado Postcard Collection floor in ait of laughter EVERY TIME You can imagine how it went reading this Ridiculous Zanetti should have thought about her dehumanizing word that I m going to use to replace my woman s actual name choice The Rainbow Bridge for a bit longer This was unfortunate and jarringEROTIC BLOODSUCKINGAnyone who knows me and isamiliar with my reviews knows I think erotic bloodsucking is disgusting beyond beliefOh and we have another charming *disgusting trope that is popular in romance novels *trope that is popular in romance novels The hero discovers the heroine reading a BDSM erotic or romance book and unilaterally decides that they have to recreate whatever sex scene in the book in bed Despite the heroine s heartfelt and vocal protests This has seriously become a trope It happens ALL THE TIME in romance books nowadays I blame 50 Shades I want to stress to my readers just because a woman is reading a romance or erotica that showcases a certain type of sex DOES NOT MEAN that she wants you to do those specific acts to herwith her Please do not get confused What if a boyfriend caught me reading this book yesterday Well he wouldn t because I am open and out about reading romances and therefore there would be no catching me reading them as if it were some shameful and secret activity ANYWAY Does that mean he could safely assume that I want him to do stuff like brand me completely skip oreplay and tell me when I can or Daughter Janie But whatever it takes has never before included a shotgun wedding to a dangerous looking stranger with an attitude problem Or Else Sure the mysterious Talen says thatThink After Living 350 Years