Nd decency Can t have that now can we Well newsflash this was a very realistic BDSM story For once the TPE aspect as well was very realistic BDSM story For once the TPE aspect as well was as it should be namely valid only until one party decides it s over This happens often in real life than you d think if all you do is read romance novels I know many many subs and doms who simply walk out of a relationship because it doesn t work BDSM isn t better in that
than vanilla because sure as hell doesn t cure the problems arising in ANY relationship It s just a different expression of itAs such it was refreshing to read here the reflections of both dom and sub about play which clearly went wrong and which overstepped boundaries which in reality is by the way ar worse than people seem to think It dealt with errors made by the dom also happens often than you d think in a manner that I ve seen play out before me if both parties are lucky that isI had niggles with the writing per se there were plotholes and the prose needed showing and less telling This author needs experience and a good demanding betaeditor to work with Which is why I didn t give it 5However BDSM wise and as a peek at relationship dynamics this was lovely and well observed Not even 150 years ago people duelled over what we today consider minor slights received in public in Death in Mumbai front of witnesses There were duels as recently as 1967 in Franceor instance again over public humiliation There have been several recent suicides over public humiliation eg outing people as gay publishing photos or videos of them So anyone who considers unwanted humiliation in Baccarat : La lgende du cristal front ofriends and one s peers as something which is of no conseuence really needs to get their value systems straightened out again Public humiliation is a severe injury and most definitely cannot be part of BDSM play when it isn t agreed to Dear MA JacksonI would send this personally but as you aren t a Goodreads Author you don t have a message option Sorry is the magic word I am SO sorry O Colégio de Todos os Segredos for how some people are treating you with this story If people don t like it that sine but they don t need to get mad at you March Violets (Bernie Gunther, forollowing the prompt especially when you gave a warning at the beginning that your view might be different than others It is possible to have TPE without the humiliation aspect Gillibrand rom Fun With Dick and Shane is in a TPE relationship and he is not purposely humiliated and that is a true
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"Story Your Story Sounds Really "Your story sounds really to me actuall. At an intense tennis camp where they are not allowed to have any contact with anyone except or emergencies The camp ends next week Friday will he come back to me or by humiliating him did I lose him Water Music for good I love him Please write this story and let him know I love himPhoto Description A young man standsacing a wooden privacy Revived fence arms raised behind his head He wears alipped sun visor no shirt and his white shorts are pulled low exposing his muscled back and tanned bottomThis story was written as a part of the MM Roman. .
Y like the dom actually thinks about his sub as a human being capable of emotions There are times or total dominance and submission and times when exhibiting that may not be appropriate I thought I could read your story but I don t think I can after all I have a heard time with TPE and I ESPECIALLY DON T LIKE IT WHEN IT INVOLVES HUMILIATION don t like it when it involves humiliation allBut that s the only reason I m
"Not Reading It I Want "reading it I want thank you again or donating your time energy and creative spirit to Love s Landscapes and I hope you keep writing You will continue to improve and hone your skills as you go Most popular writers started out with bad reviews I ear I need to stop reading BDSM stories or I ll throw my laptop one dayview spoiler The punishment in the beginning was than deserved so I really don t see what the Love for Imperfect Things fuss is about and the Dom warned his sub about the whole thing Humiliated him As if all Bryan did was doing his job as Dylan s Dom And how Dylan acts in the end Like a spoilt brat A sub like him He needs a cock cage daily spankings boundaries so tight he gaspsor air and a Dom that really shows him his place My Master would not have been so A Heart of Stone forgiving hide spoiler I didn t like this story but I am giving it 4 starsor the writing I think the author did a good job and my problem was with the prompt than the writing The prompt sounded alright But reading it over it places ar too much blame on the Dom And the author did to eualize the blame than the prompt And I think the author did a moderately good job writing a relationship a BDSM world and some concept of BDSM I don t totally agree with her concept but realistic than a lot of BDSM writing And there weren t noticeable laws in writingI could imagine a sub acting the way Dylan acted And a Dom does have a responsibility not to push their sub too Language and Linguistics far And to talk to them before ending a scene This was a majorailure of communication However the sub also has a responsibility to communicate when he is uncomfortable And to Divertimento follow the contract not leave in anger And it wasn t clear to me that either member of this relationship understood where things went wrong or adeuately apologized And the story also made a big deal about the reason why Dylan was punished which Ielt was arguable an appropriate reason but also clearly an excuse Love Is a Fairy Tale for what Bryanelt was a pre planned sceneSo really this wasn t good Promise at Dawn for me at all in the BDSM story But the writing wasine and I d like to see rom Ms Jackson. Ce Group's Love’s Landscapes event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story This story may contain sexually explicit content and is intended or adult readers It may contain content that is disagreeable or distressing to some readers The MM Romance Group strongly recommends that each reader review the General Information section before each story Bangkok Wakes to Rain for story tags as well asor content warnings. ,
Nice prompt and image but the execution was a mess This story was a lot of things but not BDSM Both men acted like children I didn t see a Dom and sub here I saw two idiots Writing was okay but there was no plot and the MCs were one dimensional The incident that triggered the punishment was ridiculous This was an all around aggravating story no steam and almost no interaction between the MCs This was an enjoyable change of pace
the two MCs spend 99% of the story apart as theytwo MCs spend 99% of the story apart as they on their relationship and communication I wouldn t want every story I read to be like this but once in a while it s nice 35 stars Okay ish Too much telling versus showing It looked to me the men wanted somewhat different things rom their relationship Let me explainNo There is too much Let me sum up Inigo MMisunderstandings poor planning and acting before thinking I have a hard time enjoying stories based on miscommunication Add in the retrospective chunk of time that predominates the story and we end up spending only a Darkmere few paragraphs at the beginning and aew at the end with the characters actually occupying the same space I just had a difficult time connecting with the characters and their relationship On the upside I liked the mentoringsupport aspect to Dylan and Bryan s community Okay It s been a stressful day but I really want to write this review so Et si la maladie n'tait pas un hasard ? forgive me if it ends up being a bit scrappy First off The prompt is very specific and somewha Enjoyable short story good writing and I loved the pic and prompt Many thanks to the authoror participating in the Love s Landscapes event This was lovely even given a Den of Shadows (Gamblers Den few issues with the writing it was still enoughor a Scraps Of The Untainted Sky full on 4Like An Old Fashioned Love Song this storyeatures recognisable realistic BDSM with recognisable real people as the Top and bottom And like nearly every other recognisable and realistic BDSM story out there this gets downrated and downtalked The Eric Carle Gift Set for being too sweet no proper BDSM and tooluffyWhen I look at such completely zany reactions as those I read regarding this story I get all ragey over the Huguenot Prophecy and Clandestine Worship in the Eighteenth Century fact that by now BDSM and kink are so utterly misrepresented to romance readers by a bazillion writers not knowing theirst things about it that these readers end up calling realistic renditions
of BDSM out Fashion Design Course for being unrealistic orluffy God beware where do we end ifBDSM out Aeralis (The Frost Chronicles, for being unrealistic orluffy God beware where do we end if manage to have some un without torturing each other into PTSD or show some common sense each other into PTSD or show some common sense AuthorI am a Dom who blew it with my boy; see the picture and you will see I sent him to the corner or punishment out in my backyard Unfortunately when I did that some Cincinnati and Other Plays friends of mine and some of hisriends were there also Speak Out! for a BB party After the party was over he left and it has beenive days He isn’t with any of his I Like You the Best friends or hisamily and I am worried I have tried calling him emailing him and texting him but no response I The collectors encyclopedia of antique marbles finally got a clue I remembered him telling me about a chance to be a counselor and trainer.